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This Is Why I Hate You

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This Is Why I Hate You is the second book of Onision.

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The book, "This is Why I Hate You," put a lot of real world problems in an interesting perspective but also 360's into lighthearted topics as well; Overall, it's nice seeing that even if a coin does have two sides.. you wouldn't have a full story.. without those things~ Had a tiny bit of grammar-errors but as being this is some of the authors first works (of many wonderful more to come) I felt myself wanting to see more from this view; rather than, how it all summed up. That being said "..Why I hate you" became very clear and that alone~ gave it a nice ending tone for me. It made it easy- to look past the few hiccups. ^_^

  • 8/8 creativity: felt like the idea was displayed the way the author intended 
  • 7/8 grammar: Like I said before; wasn't the worst but I feel like it needed 1 or 2 more polishes 
  • 8/8 development: there is a concrete arch or change in tone that's seen in the people but a nice balance of good subtle things that stay the same
  • 8/8 emotions: seeing the sides of the coin really hit here and I felt myself feeling things the other characters felt along with them 
  • 8/8 content/quality: personally I found the overall story fun/ interesting was an easy read and action-packed~

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